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My Final Painful Breath by =brightii:iconbrightii:

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©2009 =brightii
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Once I've drawn my final painful breath
and disfigured any beauty my mind holds of you
This process of pain can be ended elegantly
With no distaste no fear of soul decay
I felt betrayed, for so long
I cant let go these failures dragged me down
I whither away
I Killed The Prom Queen

Sorry for submitting that much in the last days. :aww:
[link] [link] =Nirelstock / [link] ~shudder-stock / [link] ~cam-stock

This is my entry for =Nirelstock's "Trauma Contest" [link]

:note:I wanted to portray the sad story of a friend of mine, who watched her best friend comitted suicide by lying on rails. She has never gotten over the death of her best friend ...

Anyway, hope you like it.




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:iconderzorvadur:
=Derzorvadur Apr 17, 2009, 10:08:26 AM
I love it this is such a dramatic scene, and that gives so much impact, the angle from where am seeing it it screams "danger" and also it has an air of "AM NOT AFRAID" I love it because to me it shows the side where a person actually is ready to embrace death, and is ready to let it go, a person who is not materially attached to this world, because like some people say many of us are just borrowed into this world.

I love the colors you used, they give such different view to this image, I mean it could have been any color but I believe that you made this concept your own and you actually nailed it with this one, I love it you did a great work, it is balanced and well blended.
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=galipwolkan Apr 6, 2009, 5:46:54 AM
:clap: suPer

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..sanat için sanat..
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~misteryscen Apr 6, 2009, 5:47:34 AM
My God, this is fantastic...I LOVE it ...:heart: such a great feeling..beautifully done;)

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I will miss this, but I have to move on .
♥
:rose:
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=CSnyder Apr 6, 2009, 5:49:04 AM
oh my, very intense and well done:hug:
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=Schindlersky Apr 6, 2009, 5:52:27 AM
Amazing! Perfect blend!!

:clap:

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Schindler ( :: T.M.B.T :: )
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*Grooveinjector Apr 6, 2009, 6:00:27 AM
Great choice of the stocks and perfect blending! Awesome work :clap:
:iconenchanting-ce-memory:
Mood: Wow! ~enchanting-ce-memory Apr 6, 2009, 6:09:48 AM
that is awesomeeee:D wowww!

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Childhood is the kingdom where nobody dies :heart:

[i'm a slow dying flower] :butterflytwo:
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=Dina-bv Apr 6, 2009, 7:16:11 AM
it's a great job, but you should do something to that patch of white sky, it really distracts from the model. imo.

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:blackrose: shatena, 1.55, pierdut identitate:blackrose:
:iconblacksoliloquy:
Mood: Awestruck ~BlackSoliloquy Apr 6, 2009, 7:55:46 AM
Magnificent piece, very intense. The blending is absolutely flawless, and I love the colours - they definitely set the sinister mood. :heart:
Great luck on the contest!
:iconvilaki:
~Vilaki Apr 6, 2009, 8:17:37 AM
Unglaublich toll. :heart:

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    to live is to love the pain.
:iconeyliphca:
*Eyliphca Apr 6, 2009, 8:21:51 AM
wieso entschuldigst du dich das du viel hochlädst o_o besser als wie ich gar nichts >_<

echt ne sehr eindrucksvolle Arbeit.. gefällt mir sehr :heart: auch wenn du es einer sehr traurigen geschichte widmest....

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:butterflytwo: :aww: :boogie:
my photography : ~Eyly
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